I had to choose
you or me
I chose you.
You had to choose
you or me
You chose yourself
So we loved you twice
and me not at all.
You left me anyway.
You left me
devastated
and empty.
Another came along.
I had to choose
Her or me
I chose me.
She had to choose
Her or me
She chose herself
We left each other anyway
Devastated
and empty.
You came back.
And I chose you again.
Always, I guess.
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There is some really strong lines in there. Especially the
‘So we loved you twice’ is a great angle! I think if you keep working on this poem it has massive potential! Well written.
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Thank you 🙂
I’ll try my best to make it better.
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I really like your writing. If you ever want to give me some notes on what I write, I would be very happy!
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Sure!
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Brilliant word play!
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