We were like two phrases lost in translation. We made perfect sense in a language that I spoke and not at all in the language you knew.
We were like two stars that almost seemed to be touching, but were light years away. You wouldn’t know if I collapsed before it was too late.
We were like two dominoes, stacked against each other. If you fell, I’d fall with you.
We were like an eclipse. When we were together, I saw you and they saw you, but no one could see me.
We were like champagne, perfect for fancy occasions only.
We were like two halves of a broken heart. We could complete each other but we didn’t really fit.
We were like two coins, that made a lot of noise together but had lesser value apart.
We were like two nights, one darker than the other. But both still, silent, and calm.
We were like magic. I thought we were real, but you called it an illusion.
We were like two flowers blooming to be beautiful alone, but we had a stronger fragrance together.
We were beautiful. But I guess only I see it this way. Because we were like two pairs of eyes always seeing things differently.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you 🙂
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This is so relatable..
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Thank you:)
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This was utterly beautiful! Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for reading! 🙂
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I totally love this. You capture the essence of a long ago relationship I once had beautifully.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad I did.
Do read my other posts. Maybe you’ll relate to something else too? 🙂
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No doubt I will. 😊
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Thank you for liking my post. Some lovely imagery in your poem.
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This is so beautifully written. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Amazing
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Thank you 🙂
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Thoughts well expressed. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you, Anand.
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We were like two flowers blooming to be beautiful alone, but we had a stronger fragrance together. Wow! Beautiful and touching 🙂
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Thank you, Deborah. 😁
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Well minted! I like it a lot!
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Mutual vision – similar perspectives – positive expectations – so important. I hope you’ve found that “life’s partner”.
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Wow! This is a powerful poem. I’m looking forward to more.
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Not bad.
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Glad.
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This is very beautiful. I like the way you think.
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You pack a lot of meaning into a few powerful metaphors. Looking forward to more.
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Nicely done. Good rhythm…
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So clever. Your writing is just fantastic.
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Hey, this is really good!
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Thank you, George.
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We were beautiful. But I guess only I see it this way. Because we were like two pairs of eyes always seeing things differently.
This is magical. So romantic 😍.
Metaphorism at its finest.
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That means a lot. Thank you so much.
You write too?
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Yes I do. But I’m not as good as you.
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I’m pretty sure that’s not true. There seem to be no blogposts on your site, but I really would love to read something.
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I hope so 😊. I do have somethings on my blogpost.
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I don’t see it for some reason. Is it possible that you send it to me somewhere else?
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Oh sure.
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It’s here. I hope you like 😊
https://hannathegraceblogs.wordpress.com
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It’s really nice. Well done!
Do read some of the other stuff I’ve written. You might find more that you like.
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I am reading them right. I think I’m addicted to them. Xoxo
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I’m glad. 🙂
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This is beautiful x
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Lovely expression of emotions so many have experienced.
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Sadly beautiful.
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Great stuff (although personally I would drink Champagne every single day if I could afford to)
Zoe
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Me too. 😂❤
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This is very good work, well done. I enjoyed the read so I am going to reblog it for you.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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