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Hey.
Goodbyes can be such a pain in the ass.
I’m not ready for it.
I cannot believe that
Your intoxicating eyes
Won’t be my morning sun anymore.
Your heavy breath
Won’t to be the first thing
You share with me anymore.
We won’t enjoy long walks,
And windy drives,
Crazy fights and funny sights anymore.
I’m not ready for it.
I cannot let go of you.
Memories won’t suffice.
I remember the time we first met.
You hugged me, and kinda danced too.
The first day we spent together,
Ice cream and chill,
Our favourite thing.
The first time we got wet
As it rained,
And you taught me how much fun it could be.
I’m drunk all the time,
You make me sober.
I am not ready for it.
I need you.
I need to hold your hands
As if they were a part of me.
I need you to brighten my days,
And lonely dark nights.
Eating won’t be fun anymore,
Without you around to steal my food.
Who will be my alarm clock,
The only one I never want to snooze?
I am not ready for it.
I’m drunk all the time,
You make me sober.
You’re not just a pet
Your family.
Don’t die on me.
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This was beautiful 💓💓
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Thank you, means a lot!
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Yeah, who enjoys goodbyes? Powerful poem.
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this touched my heart, so beautiful
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nice…
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May I forward it to my blog, please? It touched my heart, like Sehrish Ahmed said too.
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Of course you can. Just link to my blog, and it’ll be fine. 🙂
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Great poem. Losing pets is a difficult business. Poetry helps distill that anguish in a positive direction: http://unbrokenjournal.com/2017/01/when-the-dog-gets-ready-to-die/
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Thats so emotional!!!!!Heart ached on reading this.Awesome piece of wrk
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Heart warming.
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Aww! That’s so nice😁🖒
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Right to the heart! Shared on my Facebook page!
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It is so beautiful & true.
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Beautiful; love is love!
It reminds me of when my kids were younger, and their birds died. They were devastated, and I could hardly bring myself to tell them.
Be sober, be drunk with grief; but may the intoxication, live within your heart forever.
Love is love; beautiful.
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Oh, this is such a truth! Even after 14 years, saying goodbye to her was hard. Her quality of life was gone, taken by arthritis.
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Oh this went straight to my heart I lost my pup a yr ago and the pain is still so unreal. Your words spoke volumes. Thank you❤️
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Wow very nice.
True, goodbyes are tough.
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Please forgive me if I’m mistaken, but was this poem written for your pet?
My heartfelt condolences, if what I understand from this poem is correct.
And, beautifully expressed!🙏💫
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I don’t have a pet.
But thank you so much! ❤
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u made the memories of my best buddy alive….thanks
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Awesome
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I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award https://thesehrishthing.wordpress.com/2018/02/13/sunshine-blogger-award/
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So sad! I am glad to have met you, dear friend. Thank you for stopping by, and welcome to Lasting Joy club!
Joyfully,
Dolly
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Pet?? Haha..i thought it was a lover!
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Exactly what I wanted! XD
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True. Pets are family. Losing them is painful. My mom’s dog died a few weeks ago and it broke our hearts. That dog was kind and sweet.
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Intricately beautiful! Loved the read.
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Goosebumps.
INCREDIBLE. :’)
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I am really glad you liked it.
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Everyone would. you’re a gem!
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You’re a gem too, beautiful.
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Oh. My. God. So damn emotional bro… Great choice of words… Your poems inspire me to write on those lines as well… check out my blog and click that follow icon 😉
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