Damn, your eyes.
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Draft 4
(HER)
He had beautiful eyes. Not the kind which makes you want to drown, but the kind that makes you want to swim back to the shore, which makes you want to sit on the sand while you watch the waves move back and forth, and which you just can’t get enough of. When I looked into his eyes, I saw myself. And even his eyes, just like his words, made me feel beautiful. But beneath the reflection lay emotions he never wanted to talk about. There was a story of fear narrated by his frantic eyeballs, fear of not being held on for, fear of not being worth someones time. He had once told me about it, about being an atelophobic (which he considered to be the worst fear of all).
His gleaming eyes told me about the times when he had breakdowns but no tears had come to his aid. Stars twinkled in his eyes, not of hope but of longing. Longing for the day when his fears, anxiety and confusion come to a rest. I wanted to be there when the day came, and I wanted to be the reason why.
(HIM)
She had beautiful eyes. Not the kind which makes you want to drown, but the kind which makes you want to set the world on fire. She had fire in her eyes, and it made you warm. It was a campfire by which you and your friends sat down and had marshmallows as you sang “Stairway to heaven”. It was a forest-fire burning down everything that came in its way. But it was also the fire that heated a blade to remove a bullet. It was beautiful, destructive and caring. But beneath the fire were stories only a few people knew. There was light in her eyes, unfolding the story of how she feared the darkness that consumed everything every night. There was passion in her eyes, a passion that burned brighter every day. And there was chaos, stories of when her heart had been broken, of when her mind hurt from thinking too much, and of when she just could not do anything about it.
The fire in her eyes was not of anger, but of intensity, passion and love. It was ablaze, and I wanted to burn in it. I wanted to destroy myself in her love. I wanted to burn in her fire. I wanted it so much, that even as I take my last breath, I hold it in a little longer and burn a little more.
– Excerpts from a book I will never write.
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Damn is right…
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Thank you for reading!
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It’s really good 👍
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Lovely writing. Powerful.
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Thank you for reading!
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Damn!! I feel like falling in love with those eyes…
It’s a stunning piece…
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Thank you for reading!
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Beauty , beauty and beauty.
Loved reading your post.
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Always a pleasure to hear what you have to say, Bhavna.
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Awesome post
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Thank you for reading!
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Damn your eyes get me every time. Your face is down but you look at me. I see those beautiful eyes peeking up under that broad stream of lashes. You touch my hand. God, those calloused hands send me to the edge. I feel my heart beat faster. I look at you. Bold. Strong. Your eyes…… damn those eyes.
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GOD!! Your writing gets me every time!!
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Thank you for reading!
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You should defenatly write a book
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I most probably will.
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Good, because I was ask why this was a book you’d probably never write. 😉 Keep it up!
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This is perfect
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Thank you, Tara.
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Beautiful ❤ especially the fire in her eyes was not anger😍 loved it 🙂
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You should write that book.
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I think I might.
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I would be the first one to buy. You better sign those books XD
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Haha, I will in person 😉
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Looking forward to it!
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Such a beautiful piece!
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Thank you so much ❤
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The structure is !!! This is really soft and alight! The words of true love, honestly.
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Thank you!
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A good read🖤
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I wonder…what will be your reach if you do write one! fingers crossed
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Fingers crossed 🙂
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You have it.. You have it.. I was searching for this kind of stories.. Where their are 2 lives perspectives 💜
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Please write your book, I think it will be amazing. This was one of my personal favourites of all your posts, I read it over and over again until the words really sunk in
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Just in case & FYI, there is a very old recording by Josh White (not the kid but the old man) I believe called Sam Hall. In it he sings about their eyes: God &&** their eyes.
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Forcefully passionate. I appreciate the dialogue of both partners, too, always a fun mix.
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Lovely writing Utsav.. really enjoyed reading it! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Is there a reblog button? Because I feel like I need to reblog this!
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There totally is. It’s with all the other sharing buttons. Thank you!
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Okay, turns out there isn’t. You can always copy paste and then write a link back to my blog though. Will that be fine with you?
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I’ll do that! For a second, I thought I was blind and totally missed out on the reblog button. But there really isn’t one! *sobbing*
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Haha yeah. I thought there was one. Trying to fix the issue now!
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This is beautiful. Love it!
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Thank you!
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One of the best things I’ve ever read 🙂
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Glad you did!
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Wow, this is beautiful.
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Thank you so much!
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It was ablaze, and I wanted to burn in it. I wanted to destroy myself in her love. I wanted to burn in her fire. I wanted it so much, that even as I take my last breath, I hold it in a little longer and burn a little more.
Amazing lines! My favourite lines
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Thank you!
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