Two best friends and a strange story.
Hell and Heaven were best friends.
Their favorite thing to do together
was talking about poetry
about how some poets can rhyme and still talk
and how some poets don’t like talking.
Hell would often point out
that poetry is like counting the stars
‘It is beautiful and needs all your attention’
And Heaven would tell her
‘Stop talking about yourself’.
Hell was a 23-year-old woman
who decided when she was sixteen
that her fragrance was Vodka.
Fragrance – the natural smell of the body
1/5 of a beautiful story
that is best written if it involves all the senses.
Vodka – Tastes like fire
the first time Heaven met her
A piece of him caught on fire
was it his loneliness?
Heaven was a 22-year-old man
whose biggest fear was Atelophobia
and whose metaphorical support group
was called Loneliness.
He wanted friends but was best when left alone.
Heaven was paradoxical,
self-destructive,
and as Hell would often say
‘very cute’.
How did these opposites become best friends?
I’d suggest you ask the third wheel,
a writer named Science
nicknamed Fate
pen-named Life.
Heaven was in love with Hell
Hell had a crush on someone else
and so they just spent their time
talking about poetry, hope and
a few other opposites.
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this is sooooo….interesting wooww
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Thank you!
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Yes, very interesting….
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Thank you, Girija!
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Atelophobia. I’m not afraid to admit I googled it like everyone else did 😂😂🙈 You captured me on the first sentence. And taught me a new word for myself 😬 thank you
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Haha yeah. Sometimes people have to Google it. Thank you for reading!
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Wow, this was phenomenal!
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I’m glad you liked it!
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Always
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Soo intresting….😊
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I think that’s irony as heaven existed before hell,
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Phewwww!!!!
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🙂
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Brilliant! A novel approach to an age old dilemma. Very creative Utsav!
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Thank you!
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Hell is for Hell, And Heaven for Heaven,
Mean, Hell loves not what Heaven loves,
Nor Heaven loves what Hell loves.
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Wow…superbly engaging…!!
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Glad you liked it!
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How very creative this piece is! Makes one think. 🙂
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Means a lot.
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I loved this one 💛
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Means a lot. Thank you, beautiful!
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That is absolutely wonderful!!! Love it. Cheers!!! 🙂
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Glad you did!
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I loved the personification coated with beautiful imagination👌
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Thank you!
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I LOVE this!!! ^ ^
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Glad you do!
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So good, I love this
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Thank you!
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I loved this. Composition is fantabulous 😍
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Thank you! 🙂
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Love this!
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Thank you!
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Your articles are so amazing… I really get engrossed reading them, they have catchy content because of which they are very interesting.
Some are so relatable! (& That’s the best part)
Please continue this work of yours. And do not stop at any cost. Best wishes!
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Thank you so much! Really means a lot.
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Wow…
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Thank you, Kaarthik!
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Very nice!!
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Thank you, beautiful!
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Tell me what you think of mine 🙂
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Awesome 😄😄!!!
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Yay 🙂
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